[原创]小重山 稍作修改：）

向山主人

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="4"><strong>又是匆匆春去时，</strong></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="4"><strong>问花花不语，</strong></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="4"><strong>怨归迟。</strong></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="4"><strong>挽风独立画桥西，</strong></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="4"><strong>青山外，</strong></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="4"><strong>隐隐杜鹃啼。</strong></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US"><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="4"><strong>&nbsp;</strong></font><p><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="4"><strong></strong></font></p></span></p><p><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="4"><strong></strong></font></p><p></p><p><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="4"><strong></strong></font></p><p></p><p><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="4"><strong></strong></font></p><p></p><p><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="4"><strong></strong></font></p><p><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="4"><strong></strong></font></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="4"><strong>欲效稼轩为，</strong></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="4"><strong>纶巾衣似雪，</strong></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="4"><strong>负蛾眉。</strong></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="4"><strong>如今白发胜青丝，</strong></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"><strong><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="4">韶光里，</font></strong></span></p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="4"><strong>谁念少年痴。</strong></font></span><br/><br/><br/>

向闲

<span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';"><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="4"><strong>晚吹独立，音上可商。<span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';"><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="4"><strong>纶巾衣，义上可商。</strong></font></span></strong></font></span>

剑尘

<span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';"><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="4"><strong>欲效稼轩为．此处存疑．整体略欠流畅，余同向兄．乱说哈</strong></font></span>[em04]

向山主人

<p>谢二位行家赐教。</p><p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';"><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="4"><strong>晚吹</strong>——<strong>若用晚，则[吹]字处用阳平则音协，一时未炼得适字而又惜音害义。“<span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';"><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="4">纶巾、衣满雪”非“<span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';"><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="4">纶巾衣、满雪</font></span>”“衣满雪”指素衣，恐误，今改之“衣似雪”如何？此二物皆代指书生。</font></span></strong></font></span></p><p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';"><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="4"><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">“<span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';"><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="4"><strong>欲效稼轩为</strong></font></span>”本试效仿<font face="楷体_GB2312">稼轩抱负，故而下面则有“<span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';"><font face="楷体_GB2312" size="4"><strong>纶巾衣似雪</strong></font></span>”先学本领之句。</font></span></strong></font></span></p>[em46][em46][em46]

东华人氏

<p>似觉得上下片内容不够同意，有点隔断感。</p>

水击三千

<p>也是感觉"纶巾衣"处存疑,</p>