[原创]浣溪纱

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<p><font style="FONT-SIZE: 16px;"><strong>浣溪纱&nbsp;<wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr>&nbsp;<wbr></wbr></strong></font></p><p><font style="FONT-SIZE: 16px;"><strong>一夜思量一夜风,<wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr></strong></font><font style="FONT-SIZE: 16px;"><strong>如烟往事转头空,<wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr></strong></font><font style="FONT-SIZE: 16px;"><strong>光阴太短似春红。</strong></font></p><p>&nbsp;<font style="FONT-SIZE: 16px;"><strong>朝绽枝头争秀色,<wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr><wbr></wbr></strong></font><font style="FONT-SIZE: 16px;"><strong>暮飘树底失芳踪,</strong></font><font style="FONT-SIZE: 16px;"><strong>世人何必论英雄。</strong></font></p>

向闲

不能说不好，只是觉得换头的地方意思接得太紧了，没有过片似的。

殊熠在天

同老向意见，欢迎。[em22]

午阳

谢谢向闲老师的点评,点中要害啊!下次一定注意.

午阳

<p>作者：殊熠在天 <br/>--&nbsp;&nbsp;<br/>同老向意见，欢迎。<img title="dvubb" alt="图片点击可在新窗口打开查看" src="http://www.jiangyouss.cn/Skins/Default/emot/em22.gif" align="middle" border="0"/>
        </p><p>谢谢殊熠在天光临,我是初学者请多指教哦.</p>

浔阳倦客

<p>反调：其实有很多词难以分上下片：如：</p><p>绿树听鹈鴂，更那堪、鹧鸪声住，杜鹃声切。啼到春归无寻处，苦恨芳菲都歇。算未抵人间离别。马上琵琶关塞黑。更长门、翠辇辞金阙。看燕燕，送归妾。 </p><p>将军百战身名裂。向河梁、回头万里，故人长绝。易水萧萧西风冷，满座衣冠似雪。正壮士、悲歌未彻。啼鸟还知如许恨，料不啼清泪长啼血，谁共我，醉明月。</p><p>5个典故分居上下片，怎么割开？</p>

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谢谢教授的独特见解,学习啦!