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后格律时代的七律探索(修改稿)

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<span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"><font face="黑体" size="5">第一组<br/></font>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span></span><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;">(一)跟踪后发现了秋的代表<span lang="EN-US"><br/><br/></span></span></b><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;">落后斜阳绝对红,形容一反不相同。安排熟菊繁荣院,借用深山活泼风。<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span>扼腕那堪秋代表,交情怎被酒填充?跟踪雁影无邀请,直接来由我作东。<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span></span><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;">(二)古诗短路后的一种沟通</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;"><br/></span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;">得一知交问再三,何时伴我两相参?月来满足窗留白,茶尽排除菊泛蓝。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;">推及竹心方重视,置于龙舌只高谈。古风短路春连接,替换秋云破不堪。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><br/><br/></span><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;">(三)在秋的掩护下登楼吷剑<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;"><br/></span></b><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">倦以诗名任意游,何妨吷剑独登楼?解除赤胆维持酒,联络黄花掩护秋。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">山远处无灯照顾,夜寒时有梦交流。盈盈一枕江南泪,洒遍京城不是愁。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;"><br/></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;"><br/></span><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;">(四)黄昏快递的是金陵秋梦<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span></span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;">可是霜初的确愁,终于淡化藕花洲。移交白石高升鹤,委托黄昏快递秋。<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span>无月支持山变态,有风领导水开头。完全一洗金陵梦,理解蓑衣不脱钩。<span lang="EN-US"><br/><br/></span></span><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;">(五)西风鼓励多少豪杰放肆</span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><br/></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;">总是心高骂活该,奇诗数叠鬼偷猜。蟹无指导横行去,情不怀疑直接来。<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span>半路相逢霜暗示,一秋比较菊长开。幽州自古多豪杰,敢仗西风独下台。<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span></span><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;">(六)相别在深秋欲言而不止<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span></span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;">离歌未抵楚山平,感以吴波渐动情。一串蟹黄传染酒,半篱秋白改装橙。<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span>疏棂格外风潜伏,满月当中菊发生。私有命题谁泄露?欲言还止不争鸣。<span lang="EN-US"><br/><br/></span></span><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;">(七)选择是对秋的特别解读<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span></span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;">满怀现实选秋香,何必支持菊半黄?天有色情霜腐蚀,地无声息草铺张。<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span>下岗雁被人缘碍,体面风随事业凉。未许愁来偷自慰,淋漓一抹酒边狂。<span lang="EN-US"><br/><br/></span></span><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;">(八)秘密在秋天遭受了破坏<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span></span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;">可是秋波泛滥深,江湖九月不消沉。梦多合并难规范,花太纠缠易面临。<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span>破坏瓜红浓似酒,填充露白冷于心。一方人在孤山外,几点寒鸦涉密林?<span lang="EN-US"><br/><br/></span></span><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;">(九)西风被秋的无奈所感动<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span></span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">西风紧急每追求,感动寒霜两鬓秋。于酒淡时花样改,是情深处泪痕收。<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span>制裁竹简翻看夜,推荐蒲团打坐楼。无奈此灯长点破,不缝心碎枉低头。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;"><br/><br/></span><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;">(十)批评显示出深秋的气度</span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;"><br/><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;">深秋态度不批评,一吐寒酸味道清。海口夸张根据胆,花心摘录任凭莺。<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span>烹调旧梦人成熟,刺激新潮夜夹生。虽有奇缘能改造,也无把握守平衡。<br/><span lang="EN-US"><br/><font face="黑体" size="5">第二组<br/></font><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;"><br/></span><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;">(一)节约梅的优雅和夜深沉</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;"><br/></span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;">莽撞诗潮特别流,怎堪压抑独抬头?雪真优雅风堆放,歌好深沉夜吸收。<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span>与我协调先进酒,向谁暗算未来愁。提携一坞灯如梦,节约梅红寸寸柔。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><br/><br/></span><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;">(二)秋风作乱害谁放逐自我</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;"><br/></span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">眼底深沉为几何?西风作乱涨秋波。追加夜幕封琴匣,递减诗才入酒窝。<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span>忘我时无真相丑,失踪处有伪装多。茫然一等禅钟响,聚散梨花放逐歌。<span lang="EN-US"><br/><span style="COLOR: black;"><br/></span></span></span><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;">(三)沉默是一种真正的风度</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;"><br/></span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;">预约无期问不休,江南海北梦悠悠。几封信访传奇夜,一出花招写字楼。<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span>沉默是金原为忍,淡然如水在乎流。轻轻满面皆风度,递减诗愁换酒愁。<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><br/></span><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;">(四)歧途又被春意拖累之后</span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><br/><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;">焉用牛刀逼一鸣,鸡窗透露半天晴。放怀少为春拖累,握手多能酒斗争。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;">次第风头扶梦去,轮流水面落花生。不堪浪荡声名废,那管歧途任我行。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><br/><br/></span><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;">(五)把清风团结到兰亭周围</span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;"><br/><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;">最是兰亭不敢忘,流杯一托梦浮香。无边雨细谁分解,过度春浓我测量。<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span>路窄唯嫌花拥挤,天宽或许鸟奔忙。此生可在吟边补,团结清风卷更长。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><br/><br/></span><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;">(六)在梦中使出斯文的手筋</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;"><br/></span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;">懒调粉墨扮斯文,无以长啸怎敢云?一等凡心安两处,半轮明月让三分。<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span>忘情水做春眉目,落魄花藏梦手筋。大势由天难顺我,空将浊酒洒诗裙。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><br/><br/></span><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;">(七)一些缺点被流氓所夸奖</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;"><br/></span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;">百无一用是穷奢,自许流氓不足夸。月有饥寒灯喂养,秋非饱满酒添加。<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span>放宽字缝吞遗墨,收紧眉纹夹落花。仅此般般随便外,因何耿耿掩微瑕?</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><br/><br/></span><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;">(八)嘲笑那种很真诚的自白</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;"><br/></span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;">敢以真诚偶自嘲,此生如梦费推敲。商机可遇官中介,美色难防酒外交。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;">家有逆儿非蠢货,手无余款是脓包。好车一路风头顺,再买名楼筑几巢?</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><br/></span><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;">(九)灯下有一个人行坐如僧<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span></span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;">安居习惯坐如僧,少为晨钟乱折腾。推理酒中禅有味,接风楼外燕无能。<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span>一流露白还原雨,半举春红省略灯。概括人间皆作秀,何妨托故避高朋?<span lang="EN-US"><br/><br/></span></span><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;">(十)楼上看见的是万里风波<span lang="EN-US"><br/><br/></span></span></b><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;">深林掩护鸟张罗,寂寞群山起伏坡。花不脱离春好色,雨非颠覆夜吞歌。<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span>一生梦想留成少,万里风波决定多。比划楼头重叠恨,如何劝解客经过?<span lang="EN-US"><br style="mso-special-character: line-break;"/><br style="mso-special-character: line-break;"/></span></span><font face="黑体" size="5">第三组</font><br/><br/><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-ansi-language: en-us; mso-bidi-font-family: 'mso-fareast-language:zh-cn;mso-bidi-language:ar-sa;; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;"><strong>(一)春雨代表看不懂的风景</strong></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-ansi-language: en-us; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-fareast-language: zh-cn; mso-bidi-language: ar-sa; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;"><br/></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: en-us; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-fareast-language: zh-cn; mso-bidi-language: ar-sa;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: en-us; mso-bidi-font-family: 'mso-fareast-language:zh-cn;mso-bidi-language:ar-sa;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;">春初渐觉雨纵横,洗劫山川又一成。水不平安鱼检讨,风非正直鸟批评。<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span>串联草莽腾空绿,流放檐沟落实清。无奈桐心将息后,有谁代表滴声声?</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: en-us; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-fareast-language: zh-cn; mso-bidi-language: ar-sa;"><br/></span><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-ansi-language: en-us; mso-bidi-font-family: 'mso-fareast-language:zh-cn;mso-bidi-language:ar-sa;; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-ansi-language: en-us; mso-bidi-font-family: 'mso-fareast-language:zh-cn;mso-bidi-language:ar-sa;; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;">(二)也许误会是隐情惹的祸<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span></span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: en-us; mso-bidi-font-family: 'mso-fareast-language:zh-cn;mso-bidi-language:ar-sa;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: en-us; mso-bidi-font-family: 'mso-fareast-language:zh-cn;mso-bidi-language:ar-sa;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;">衡阳雁阵结人缘,字吐寒腔写不全。误会风狂花解散,错疑石丑水流传。<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span>再三警惕中天月,万一图谋外面圆。心有隐情难照应,海棠无病我犹怜。<span lang="EN-US"><br/><br/></span></span><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-ansi-language: en-us; mso-bidi-font-family: 'mso-fareast-language:zh-cn;mso-bidi-language:ar-sa;; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;">(三)围城的局限岂止在于墙<span lang="EN-US"><br/><br/></span></span></b><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: en-us; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-fareast-language: zh-cn; mso-bidi-language: ar-sa;">局限围城恨作风,天涯半卷月真空。反常菊损正常白,异样心焚同样红。<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span>楼不进深难锁梦,话如稀释好装聋。二千里路无余地,清算尘埃一恸中。<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: en-us; mso-bidi-font-family: 'mso-fareast-language:zh-cn;mso-bidi-language:ar-sa;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;"><br/></span><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-ansi-language: en-us; mso-bidi-font-family: 'mso-fareast-language:zh-cn;mso-bidi-language:ar-sa;; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;">(四)从前总是无法让人回顾<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span></span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: en-us; mso-bidi-font-family: 'mso-fareast-language:zh-cn;mso-bidi-language:ar-sa;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: en-us; mso-bidi-font-family: 'mso-fareast-language:zh-cn;mso-bidi-language:ar-sa;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;">不堪顾问是从前,拖累寒衣盖酒边。入手花随风跌破,过头月被梦包圆。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: en-us; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-fareast-language: zh-cn; mso-bidi-language: ar-sa;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: en-us; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-fareast-language: zh-cn; mso-bidi-language: ar-sa;">路难克服高低雁,秋好调停远近船。打击霜钟真寂寞,声声懊恼互关联。<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: en-us; mso-bidi-font-family: 'mso-fareast-language:zh-cn;mso-bidi-language:ar-sa;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;"><br/></span><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-ansi-language: en-us; mso-bidi-font-family: 'mso-fareast-language:zh-cn;mso-bidi-language:ar-sa;; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;">(五)后果如一种梅子酒的酸<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span></span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: en-us; mso-bidi-font-family: 'mso-fareast-language:zh-cn;mso-bidi-language:ar-sa;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: en-us; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-fareast-language: zh-cn; mso-bidi-language: ar-sa;">了无资格枉深情,梅子原来结不成。后果那堪春渴望,前尘只为路超生。<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span>一帘梦缺填充酒,两鬓心酸腐蚀筝。坐落天南长感应,风头出没雨纵横。<span lang="EN-US"><br/><br/></span></span><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-ansi-language: en-us; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-fareast-language: zh-cn; mso-bidi-language: ar-sa; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;">(六)亲临梦中的难道都是恨</span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: en-us; mso-bidi-font-family: 'mso-fareast-language:zh-cn;mso-bidi-language:ar-sa;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;"><br/><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: en-us; mso-bidi-font-family: 'mso-fareast-language:zh-cn;mso-bidi-language:ar-sa;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;">天涯不等晚来禽,为我相寻故事深。半路山分成敌态,一时水稳作知音。<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span>柳嫌有碍长过手,春恨无常枉费心。多少碧痕依旧在,可怜换取梦亲临。<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: en-us; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-fareast-language: zh-cn; mso-bidi-language: ar-sa;"><br/></span><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-ansi-language: en-us; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-fareast-language: zh-cn; mso-bidi-language: ar-sa; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体;">(七)</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-ansi-language: en-us; mso-bidi-font-family: 'mso-fareast-language:zh-cn;mso-bidi-language:ar-sa;; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;">风衣裹住离别后的赖皮<span lang="EN-US"><br/><br/></span></span></b><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: en-us; mso-bidi-font-family: 'mso-fareast-language:zh-cn;mso-bidi-language:ar-sa;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;">此一时非彼一时,风衣布置每多疑。总归后备临门酒,分别先猜隔肚诗。 <span lang="EN-US"><br/></span>寻佩岸随舟倒退,抚箫台被凤超支。霜如外快装花样,不向秋棠耍赖皮。 <span lang="EN-US"><br/><br/></span></span><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-ansi-language: en-us; mso-bidi-font-family: 'mso-fareast-language:zh-cn;mso-bidi-language:ar-sa;; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;">(八)无知者无畏岂止是少年<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span></span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 'mso-font-kerning:1.0pt;mso-ansi-language:en-us;mso-fareast-language:zh-cn;mso-bidi-language:ar-sa;mso-fareast-font-family:宋体;;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: en-us; mso-bidi-font-family: 'mso-fareast-language:zh-cn;mso-bidi-language:ar-sa;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;">这般情绪可飘零,落向风尘侧耳听。无忌鬼谈春细节,莫愁魂夺月原形。<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span>杯中胜败三分注,眼底方圆一刹停。真是少年皆斗胆,不知深浅煮梅青。<span lang="EN-US"><br/><br/></span></span><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-ansi-language: en-us; mso-bidi-font-family: 'mso-fareast-language:zh-cn;mso-bidi-language:ar-sa;; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;">(九)英雄难过仅是美人关吗</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-bidi-language: ar-sa; mso-hansi-font-family: 'mso-font-kerning:1.0pt;mso-ansi-language:en-us;mso-bidi-font-family:'mso-fareast-language:zh-cn;"><br/></span></b><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 'mso-font-kerning:1.0pt;mso-ansi-language:en-us;mso-fareast-language:zh-cn;mso-bidi-language:ar-sa;mso-fareast-font-family:宋体;;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: en-us; mso-bidi-font-family: 'mso-fareast-language:zh-cn;mso-bidi-language:ar-sa;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;">美人一叹泪盈盈,哪个英雄不动情?酒兑诚心容受罚,花销恶气免批评。<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span>仰天示爱和谐月,背地传真薄悻名。用尽流年知退步,于无细处有言行。<span lang="EN-US"><br/></span></span><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-ansi-language: en-us; mso-bidi-font-family: 'mso-fareast-language:zh-cn;mso-bidi-language:ar-sa;; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-ansi-language: en-us; mso-bidi-font-family: 'mso-fareast-language:zh-cn;mso-bidi-language:ar-sa;; mso-hansi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;">(十)古时的送别竟如此老土<span lang="EN-US"><br/><br/></span></span></b><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: en-us; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-fareast-language: zh-cn; mso-bidi-language: ar-sa;">十里长亭又短亭,一帆高挂柳青青。水因风活添生态,山为云深出造型。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: en-us; mso-bidi-font-family: 'mso-fareast-language:zh-cn;mso-bidi-language:ar-sa;; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: en-us; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-fareast-language: zh-cn; mso-bidi-language: ar-sa;">开口鸟无春郁闷,点头花在雨飘零。相知最怕长相忆,渗透天涯酒半醒。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 'mso-font-kerning:1.0pt;mso-ansi-language:en-us;mso-bidi-font-size:12.0pt;mso-fareast-language:zh-cn;mso-bidi-language:ar-sa;mso-fareast-font-family:宋体;;"><br style="mso-special-character: line-break;"/></span><br style="mso-special-character: line-break;"/></span></span>
发表于 2008-11-20 10:14:54 | 显示全部楼层
幫無名胸合并一下,并吊起來示眾:)
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发表于 2008-11-20 10:21:33 | 显示全部楼层
我一惯喜欢无名兄这种风格,实际上是表达方法的变化,还说不上后格律。可以说是对传统语序的反动或者颠覆!
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 楼主| 发表于 2008-11-20 10:37:06 | 显示全部楼层
<p>谢一得兄合并,有劳了.</p><p>回小李:</p><p>忙着改旧货.无暇新作.这几手旧东西,是几年间陆续写的,毁誉参半,到不打紧.本来就是试笔.想想还有什么方式能表达现代人那种光怪陆离的思想.&nbsp;&nbsp; 网络上许多有识之士都做过很好的尝试.&nbsp; 比如李子,狂生,求醉等.</p><p>取径不同,各有意思. 姑且存之, 作发省之用罢. </p>
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发表于 2008-11-20 11:28:40 | 显示全部楼层
这个很有意义,新词用得活。
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发表于 2008-11-20 11:37:05 | 显示全部楼层
以创新而论,无名胸自是翘楚,情辞亦颇洽,非新之无物者,盖先本传统,熟谙诗法,其神不散。<br/>
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发表于 2008-11-20 14:54:56 | 显示全部楼层
<p>以上两兄的论!</p>
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 楼主| 发表于 2008-11-21 09:42:06 | 显示全部楼层
<p>谢楼上各位兄弟! </p><p>弟正在思考,还未找到大家都能接受的打通新旧诗的路径.</p><p>李子的尝试主要在词的领域,成就和影响都很巨大. 虽然也有批评,但其勇气和才气则不可抹杀.但李子<span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">在诗的方面探索不多</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span></font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">偶尔几首</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">,</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">也大多走的是竹枝词和民谣的路子</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">.技巧上侧重的是词语的解构(这点前人的别体诗和民国的易顺鼎都有尝试)和语感的圆熟(这点是反黄庭坚的瘦硬).</font></span></p><p><span lang="EN-US"></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">因此在诗的方面做点探索</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">,</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">不仅有空间</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">,</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">也有可能</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">. </font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">只是困难多点</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">.再次感谢大家.也欢迎大家提出真知灼见.</font></span></p><br/>
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发表于 2008-11-21 10:19:21 | 显示全部楼层
有本之源,其流不竭,竟可成川;無根之萍,其漂或遠,終不成器。
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发表于 2008-11-24 23:35:28 | 显示全部楼层
颇新耳目,支持探索。:)
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