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发表于 2008-11-26 21:57:47 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
<p></p><p>杨花直上重霄九,白絮搅天天似盲。<br/>佳气云间还若有,和风梦外竟何成?<br/>走红弄碧前朝盛,动魄伤魂此日惊。<br/>好倩离人多爱惜,无声飞去是春情。<br/></p><p>外一首:</p><p>读警方防盗防抢短信有记 </p><p>又遇年关近,更逢世运衰。<br/>有司徒寄语,防贼返乡时。</p><p></p>
发表于 2008-11-27 09:03:05 | 显示全部楼层
走红弄碧,红字与杨不恰。
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发表于 2008-11-28 12:25:38 | 显示全部楼层
好倩离人多爱惜,无声飞去是春情。---------<span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">言外之意</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">, <span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;</span></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">由物及人。故“观物象、明易理”而善譬之于人事者,非孔子乎?</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;">&nbsp;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;</span><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;</span></span>
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发表于 2008-11-28 16:49:46 | 显示全部楼层
似乎所选的角度不那么吸引人.无声飞去是春情.单看这句很好啊.
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 楼主| 发表于 2008-11-28 19:50:26 | 显示全部楼层
多谢向兄、无以为名兄、天一兄指点,“红”我也觉不顺,奈何才拙,“走”字又无法改动,只能先放着了此作因26日某事起兴,事涉敏感,弟也不便明言,草成此作,聊作记念并借杨花以寄哀思
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