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发表于 2008-11-27 14:23:39 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
<p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 18pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"><font color="#0000ff" size="5">自将黑板擦年年,铁券功名已化烟。</font></span><span lang="EN-US"><br/></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"><font color="#0000ff" size="5"><br/>李栋桃梁聊自慰,香车宝马愧时贤。</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 18pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"><font color="#0000ff" size="5"></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 18pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"><font color="#0000ff" size="5"><br/>诗无一句能传后,棋有三招敢让先。<br/></font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><font color="#0000ff" size="5"><br/>养得狂狷贫士节,齐王轻莫命来前。</font></span></p><p><font color="#bb5c44" size="5">篡改:</font></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><font color="#bb5c44" size="5">自将黑板擦年年,铁券功名已化烟。</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><font color="#bb5c44" size="5">李栋桃梁骄数子,才高学富愧时贤。</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><font color="#bb5c44" size="5">诗无一句能传后,棋有三招敢让先。</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/></span><font size="4"><font color="#bb5c44"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><font size="5">养得狂狷贫士节,齐王慎莫命来前。</font></span><br/></font></font><br/></p>
发表于 2008-11-27 16:33:21 | 显示全部楼层
<p><font color="#0000ff" size="5">颔联对句似可酌</font></p>
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发表于 2008-11-27 17:08:45 | 显示全部楼层
<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>浔阳倦客</i>在2008-11-27 14:23:39的发言:</b><br/><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 18pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"><font color="#0000ff" size="5">自将黑板擦年年,铁券功名已化烟。</font></span><span lang="EN-US"><br/></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"><font color="#0000ff" size="5"><br/>李栋桃梁聊自慰,香车宝马愧时贤。</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 18pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"><font color="#0000ff" size="5"></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 18pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"><font color="#0000ff" size="5"><br/>诗无一句能传后,棋有三招敢让先。<br/></font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><font color="#0000ff" size="5"><br/>养得狂狷贫士节,齐王轻莫命来前。</font></span></p><br/><br/></div><p></p><p>浔兄妙和啊.初读第一句,觉得太俚了,越往后读,不觉抚掌叫好.三联妙.结见兄狷者之风,名士风度啊.佩服!</p><p><strong>也效颦了一首,供兄一哂.</strong></p><p><strong>冬日自遣 七律</strong></p><div style="ADDING-RIGHT: 0px; MARGIN-TOP: 10px; FONT-SIZE: 14pt; OVERFLOW-X: hidden; WIDTH: 97%; WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-INDENT: 24px; LINE-HEIGHT: normal; HEIGHT: 200px; WORD-WRAP: break-word;"><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';">难从指隙挽流年,长铗哀歌弹作烟。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';">中酒才知世情淡,扪心常愧古人贤。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';">运来几度甘牛后,名至何曾跃马先。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman';">已惯岁寒心未冷,苍松郁郁入云天。</span></p></div>
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 楼主| 发表于 2008-11-27 17:40:57 | 显示全部楼层
<p>回东华兄,不是似可酌,而是完全要酌,后半没有对,</p><p>回风兄,谢兄赏读,巨汗。兄大作起结都非常好,颈联甘牛后不解.</p>
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发表于 2008-11-27 20:00:13 | 显示全部楼层
<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>浔阳倦客</i>在2008-11-27 17:40:57的发言:</b><br/><p>回东华兄,不是似可酌,而是完全要酌,后半没有对,</p><p>回风兄,谢兄赏读,巨汗。兄大作起结都非常好,颈联甘牛后不解.</p></div><p>谢谢浔兄,牛后典出自下文。</p><p>苏秦为楚合从,说韩王曰:“韩北有巩、洛、成皋之固,西有宜阳、常阪之塞,东有宛、穰、淆水,南有陉山,地方千里,带甲数十万。天下之强弓劲弩,皆自韩出。溪子、少府、时力、距来,皆射六百步之外。韩卒超足百射,百发不暇止,远者达胸,近者掩心。韩卒之剑裁,皆出于冥山、棠溪、墨阳、合伯膊。邓师、宛冯、龙渊、大阿,皆陆断马牛,水击鹄雁,当敌即斩坚。甲、盾、继、鍪、铁幕、革抉、缤芮,无不毕具。以韩卒之勇,被坚甲,跖劲弩,带利剑,一人当百,不足言也。夫以韩之劲,与大王之贤,乃欲西面事秦,称东藩,筑帝宫,受冠带,祠春秋,交臂而服焉,夫羞社稷而为天下笑,无过此者矣。是故愿大王之熟计之也。 <br/>“大王事秦,秦必求宜阳、成皋。今兹效之,明年又益求割地。与之,即无地以给之;不与,则弃前功而后更受其祸。且夫大王之地有尽,而秦之求无已。夫以有尽之地而逆无已之求,此所谓市怨而买祸者也,不战而地已削矣。臣闻鄙语曰:‘宁为鸡口,无为牛后。’今大王西面交臂而臣事秦,何以异于牛后乎?夫以大王之贤,挟强韩之兵,而有牛后之名,臣窃为大王羞之。” <br/></p>
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发表于 2008-11-27 21:18:28 | 显示全部楼层
<p>谢倦兄赐和!大作极好,学习!</p><p>再谢风兄!“牛后”,涪翁也用过,“听它下虎口着,我不为牛后人。”当然风兄的出处更早咯。</p>
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 楼主| 发表于 2008-11-28 11:02:49 | 显示全部楼层
<p><font color="#0000ff" size="5">谢作废兄释疑O(∩_∩)O哈哈~</font></p><p><font color="#0000ff" size="5">篡改一下</font></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><font color="#0000ff" size="5">自将黑板擦年年,铁券功名已化烟。</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><font color="#0000ff" size="5">李栋桃梁骄数子,才高学富愧时贤。</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><font color="#0000ff" size="5">诗无一句能传后,棋有三招敢让先。</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><font color="#0000ff" size="5">养得狂狷贫士节,齐王慎莫命来前。</font></span></p>
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发表于 2008-11-28 11:22:31 | 显示全部楼层
谢倦兄!更好了。
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发表于 2008-11-28 15:06:22 | 显示全部楼层
<font face="宋体" color="#0000ff" size="5">诗无一句能传后,棋有三招敢让先----<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"><font color="#000000" size="3">这联就可传后。。。。。。</font></span></p></font>
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