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江湖小李

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">1</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">咏雁用贺双卿词意寄天涯兼示绿烟</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">红霞散绮向遥天，孤影浓霜倍可怜。罗网久张惊梦惯，缠绵虽好断肠先。听风怕看平沙水，怯远翻亲岁暮烟。鹭意鸥情殊未是，倦飞误宿野人田。（</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">20090201</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">）</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US"><p><font face="Times New Roman"></font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">2</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">一叹寄天涯兼示长沙、株洲诸诗友</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">清才天妒岂足凭，又见当年贺双卿。独向天涯伤只影，遭逢异代感零丁。怜人不肯脱罗网，倾泪终难赎娉婷。万种因由真是命？无情不料是多情。（</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">20090201</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">）</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US"><p><font face="Times New Roman">3&nbsp;</font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">口占寄海上</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">当时别处最难堪，海上蜃楼作笑谈。经过才知情义好，夜来无计梦魂安。逢春怕到渌江渡，有忆都归白兔潭。</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">(</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">此联或作：逢春怕看桃李艳，有忆都归水云寒。</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">)</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">羡煞梁间双燕子，衔泥梳羽互呢喃。（</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">20090205</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">）</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span lang="EN-US"><p><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;</font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">注：贺双卿（</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">1713~1736</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">年），江苏金坛人氏，初名卿卿，一名庄青，字秋碧，为家中第二个女儿，故名双卿。嫁金坛绡山村周家。丈夫叫周大旺，粗俗不堪，生性粗暴，而且嗜赌成性；婆婆杨氏更是刁泼蛮恶。在身体与精神的双重折磨下，双卿嫁到周家后不久便患上了严重的疟疾。据清代史震林（</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">1692~1778</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">年）《西青散记》记载，双卿到婆家后不长时间，便久病不愈，在临终前的日子里，</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">“</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">事舅姑愈谨，邻里称其孝。夫性益暴，善承其喜怒，弗敢稍忤。</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">”</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">后人尊其为</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">“</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">清代第一女词人</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">”</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">，又称</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">“</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">清代李清照</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">”</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 21pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">清人丁绍仪在《听秋馆词话》中写道：</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">“</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">双卿生有夙慧，嫁给金坛周姓樵子，家无纸笔，所为诗词悉芦叶写之。</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">”</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">清代陈廷焯撰《白雨斋词话》评曰：</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">“</font></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">西青散记，载绡山女子双卿词十二阕。双卿负绝世才，秉绝代姿，为农家妇。姑恶夫暴，劳瘁以死。生平所为诗词，不愿留墨迹，每以粉笔书芦叶上，以粉易脱，叶易败也。其旨幽深窈曲，怨而不怒，古今逸品也。其旨幽深窈曲，怨而不怒，古今逸品也。日用细故，信手拈来，都成异彩。</span><span lang="EN-US"><font face="Times New Roman">" </font></span></p>

向闲

1与3皆好,2似仍可炼.

红叶

佳作欣赏，别出心裁。最喜3

杜煜辛

好句多多，大赏。

江湖小李

渌江有女名天涯，瘦骨清才两堪夸。贫病恰同双卿贺，始知天道忌物华。

浔阳倦客

都是好诗

仰斋

既工且稳。入声字尚需注意，脱，物俱是。

江湖小李

谢傅翁正，非不知也，是疏且懒！