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[原创]咏物二首

发表于 2007-2-15 10:04:44 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式

<p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; tab-stops: 207.0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">骆驼</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;">
<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; tab-stops: 207.0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">大漠风沙日已西，年年负重贵坚持。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">
<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; tab-stops: 207.0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">征程万里何辞苦？执着追求不歇蹄。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; tab-stops: 207.0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"></span></p><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"></span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; tab-stops: 207.0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">啄木鸟</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt;">
<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; tab-stops: 207.0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">雪雨霜风挺傲姿，百磨千折志难移。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">
<p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="center" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: center; tab-stops: 207.0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">惟期啄尽神州木，不使蠹虫华厦危。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"></span></p></span>

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发表于 2007-2-15 17:38:00 | 显示全部楼层

感觉有点散，拟人亦过了。状物抽象，由表及里的层次，尚未分明。

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发表于 2007-2-17 20:35:37 | 显示全部楼层

<p>拜个年，祝一切安好！</p>

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