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发表于 2009-3-23 11:38:47 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
<p>烛影又红锦帐霞,春生翠被笔生花。<br/>月明沧海蚌珠华。</p><p>此际金门斟琥珀,重来英物庆奢遮。<br/>凤池虎榜待宣麻。</p>
发表于 2009-3-23 11:49:41 | 显示全部楼层
哈哈,赶紧收下了!
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发表于 2009-3-23 13:33:01 | 显示全部楼层
<p>注一个:二度梅是也。</p>
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发表于 2009-3-23 14:01:55 | 显示全部楼层
<p>“春生翠被笔生花”,切人切事,好句!唯前句“红”字孤平。我也跟一首(似只能称序,算不得诗。):</p><p><strong>贺东华兄(限华韵)</strong></p><p>时当春月,桃始著花。</p><p>补设婚宴,四味酒家。</p><p>款吾贺者,以啤代茶。</p><p>此何人氏?大号东华。</p><br/><br/><br/>
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发表于 2009-3-23 14:07:04 | 显示全部楼层
春生翠被笔生花,这句比较蕴藉。[em01]
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发表于 2009-3-23 16:41:24 | 显示全部楼层
<p>祝贺!</p><p>月明沧海蚌珠华,蓝田有玉乎[em01]</p>
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发表于 2009-3-23 21:37:07 | 显示全部楼层
<p>春来无处不秾华,喜气沾时酒劲加。<br/>四海风云犹有待,麒麟堕地出君家。</p>
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发表于 2009-3-24 12:21:49 | 显示全部楼层
祝贺先。但就词作而言,似未能意随笔到。
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发表于 2009-3-24 12:27:10 | 显示全部楼层
<p><font size="3">转帖叶凝秋两首贺词:</font></p><p><font size="3">满庭芳&nbsp;&nbsp; 己丑上元为晦蛰二先生寿</font></p><p><font size="3">彩焕南山,光摇北海,一轮清镜重磨。烛龙衔夜,樽桂泛金波。遥想诗翁对饮,银潢泻、梦影婆娑。题襟事,悠然回首,花外白云多。<span lang="EN-US" xmllang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: 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弹歌。犹未彻,重添甲子,莫问愁何。更拈笛梅亭,步马椒阿。浩浩天风荡魄,春星缀、万柄铜荷。还消与,赣烟沽水,归去唱渔蓑。</font></p><p><font size="3">春从天上来&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; 己丑花朝日寄颖庐先生,用玉田格</font></p><font size="3"><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-margin-top-alt: auto; mso-margin-bottom-alt: auto; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">剪梦诗红。又早莺啼转,一缕东风。渐惹梨云,乍深薇影,端合费煞春工。还记仙娥当日,辞贝阙、设帨珍丛。赣烟中。想涉江人在,手把芙蓉。<span lang="EN-US"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span></span>匆匆。落花几度,任蝶去蜂回,独抱幽衷。消得吟怀,鬓蚕自茧,何曾嗟对青铜。但引溪山明月,清光映、绛帐恩浓。更谁同。有京华倦客,远奉瑶锺。<span lang="EN-US">
                                        <p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p>——雍容和婉外每句得题,治丝不棼。</p></font>
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 楼主| 发表于 2009-3-25 14:59:01 | 显示全部楼层
从烛影摇红中化来,着一又字,机锋在矣,可答倦兄。华嫂有喜,意亦到矣。
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