陪江右诸友登浔阳楼

抱月斋

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">楚水连天去，江风吹面寒。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">花翻飘玉砌，人倦倚危栏。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">怅望梁山远，低吟画壁残。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">隔窗听鸟语，犹似话招安。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><br/><br/>

今是昨非斋

首联甚有气势！

水击三千

过，吟似可再炼。结借鸟语说出心中之慨，妙。

抱月斋

谢今兄\水兄雅评,固再推敲.

红叶

结的有意思

惜梦缘

俺那天怎么没听见鸟叫呢[em01]

菜人

<font size="5">“江风吹面寒”，这个草兄有最有发言权。</font>

抱月斋

谢红叶、菜人兄、惜姐点评。