[原创]七律 登明月山

鄱湖渔歌

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">山弯径曲接云天，奇石芦花缀涧边。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">
                        <p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">晃月桥迷游客路，美人虹挂瀑飞泉。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">
                        <p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">斜晖尽染翠微竹，草色平铺青玉笺。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">
                        <p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">我亦振襟千仞上，好霑<span class="diczx1">澍雨作梅仙。</span></span><span class="diczx1"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;">
                                <p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span class="diczx1"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;</font></p></span></span></p><p><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;</font></p><p></p><br/><br/>

红叶

<p>渔歌最近很勤快啊：）</p>

鄱湖渔歌

<p>谢</p>

风过苍筠

渔歌诗兄好诗兴，步健，笔也健。学习。

草啸

<p>首联可酌，径/路重复，游客路/瀑飞泉，欠工。喜欢结局。</p>

鄱湖渔歌

<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>草啸</i>在2007-2-25 11:20:10的发言：</b><br/><p>首联可酌，径/路重复，游客路/瀑飞泉，欠工。喜欢结局。</p></div><p>恩待改&nbsp;</p>

东华人氏

<p>美景佳境好诗韵！大赏！</p>

浔阳倦客

颔联略有不工。我亦赘余。

鄱湖渔歌

东华兄何日回昌.倦客兄我亦句借用&nbsp; "我欲振衣千仞上",&nbsp; 所以我亦

鄱湖渔歌

<p>改稿如下;</p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">七律</span><font face="Times New Roman"><br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;</font><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">登明月山</span><span class="diczx1"><span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span class="diczx1"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">山阶陡峭雾连天，奇石芦花缀涧边。</span></span><span class="diczx1"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span class="diczx1"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">晃月桥迷游客路，美人虹挂郑公泉。</span></span><span class="diczx1"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span class="diczx1"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">斜晖尽染翠微竹，草色平铺青玉笺。</span></span><span class="diczx1"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span class="diczx1"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">我欲振襟千仞上，好霑澍雨作梅仙。</span></span><span class="diczx1"><span lang="EN-US" style="mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p>注;"<span class="diczx1"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">我欲振襟千仞上"用清人江为龙句&nbsp;"<span class="diczx1"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman'; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">我欲振衣千仞上".</span></span></span></span></p><br/>