春之声

唐洪光

<p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;MS Sans Serif&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">何处清风拂柳条，</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;&quot;; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;&quot;;">双飞燕子过林梢。</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;MS Sans Serif&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">田园重现当年景，秀竹长舒久折腰。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">青草湖中烟漠漠，白云山上雨萧萧。东君也识旧时路，又到人间破寂寥。<p></p></span></p><p></p><p>头都想破了，只能先这样，请师父海砸。</p>

一得愚生

<p>惟三聯可取<br/>二聯最差　且當年景不對久折腰　<br/>雙飛不如雙雙<br/>前面已是仲春之景　結尾卻似迎春</p>

殊熠在天

<p>如开春画幅。</p><p>小唐子还得努力！</p>

唐洪光

<p>修改：</p><font size="2"><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;MS Sans Serif&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">何处清风拂柳条，</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;&quot;;">双飞燕子过林梢。</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'MS Sans Serif'; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;">田园重现峥嵘景，秀竹长舒憔悴腰。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;">青草湖中烟漠漠，白云山上雨萧萧。天公从此施丹粉，爽气恒多瘴气消。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-layout-grid-align: none;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-font-kerning: 0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-ansi-language: ZH-CN;"><p>峥嵘－－憔悴－－是反义词，这样可以吗？请师父指点。</p></span></p><p></p></font>