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发表于 2009-7-26 22:10:38 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
<p style="BACKGROUND: white; WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt;"><font face="宋体"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; COLOR: black; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma;">遣怀</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><p></p></span></font></p><p style="BACKGROUND: white; WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt;"><font face="宋体"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; COLOR: black; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma;">疏帘轻飐绿杨风,几许烟光晓镜中。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><p></p></span></font></p><p style="BACKGROUND: white; WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt;"><font face="宋体"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; COLOR: black; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma;">病眼不知春远近,平生错认骨玲珑。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><p></p></span></font></p><p style="BACKGROUND: white; WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt;"><font face="宋体"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; COLOR: black; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma;">梦于醒后蝶空瘦,痛到深时句始工。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><p></p></span></font></p><p style="BACKGROUND: white; WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt;"><font face="宋体"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; COLOR: black; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma;">玉笛一声云欲积,榴花红湿雨濛濛。<br/></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;"><p></p></span></font></p><p style="BACKGROUND: white; WORD-BREAK: break-all; TEXT-INDENT: 18pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; COLOR: black; mso-hansi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-bidi-font-family: Tahoma; mso-ascii-font-family: Tahoma;"><font face="宋体">无题</font></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 15pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: Tahoma;">
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发表于 2009-7-27 09:37:32 | 显示全部楼层
律句琢煉,愈見精粹。不肯等閒一字,是自由之必由也。
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发表于 2009-7-27 13:46:56 | 显示全部楼层
小月好诗,孤怀独抱。
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 楼主| 发表于 2009-7-27 20:22:15 | 显示全部楼层
拜谢先生鼓励!问候雨如,谢评!
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发表于 2009-7-28 00:37:10 | 显示全部楼层
欣赏!
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发表于 2009-8-6 22:30:51 | 显示全部楼层
段姐评的是。
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发表于 2009-8-7 20:05:57 | 显示全部楼层
渐入含蓄深邃
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 楼主| 发表于 2009-8-9 13:32:18 | 显示全部楼层
谢过诸兄评。望多砸才是!
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