庐山二首

浔阳倦客

<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial;"><font face="宋体" color="#0000ff" size="5">庐山二首</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial;"><br/></span><font color="#0000ff"><font face="宋体"><font size="5"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial;">一</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span></span></font><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial;"><font size="5">封闭编辑历</font><font size="6"><font size="5">代庐山诗词全集</font></font></span></font></font><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial;"><font face="宋体" color="#0000ff" size="5">借得林泉避世尘，青灯黄卷更磨人。</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial;"><font face="宋体" color="#0000ff" size="5">云屏久视花双眼，玉键频敲痛一身。</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial;"><font face="宋体" color="#0000ff" size="5">虽有方家堪请益，奈无慧质倍劳神。</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial;"><br/></span><font face="宋体"><font color="#0000ff"><font size="7"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial;"><font size="5">名山事业原非易，</font><font size="5">未敢滔滔说苦辛。</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial;"><p></p></span></font></font></font></p><p></p><p></p><p><font color="#0000ff"><font size="4"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial;"><font face="宋体">二</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span></span></font><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial;"><font face="宋体" size="5">次杜华平游木瓜洞海会寺韵</font></span></font><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial;"><font face="宋体" color="#0000ff" size="5">公余寄兴山南北，展臂林间作老猿。</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial;"><font face="宋体" color="#0000ff" size="5">古寺漫寻云里静，遗踪浅踏雨前昏。</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial;"><font face="宋体" color="#0000ff" size="5">见闻须自交游广，学问岂徒故纸翻。</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial;"><br/></span><font face="宋体"><font color="#0000ff"><font size="5"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial;"><font size="5">录取欢声与清景，归来再向笑中论</font><font size="5">。</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial;"><p></p></span></font></font></font></p><p></p><p></p><font color="#0000ff"><font size="6"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;">附：<font size="5">杜华平《</font></span></font><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><font size="5">七月二十二日刘馆长邀游木瓜洞海会寺，时逢日食，归后苦吟成长句一首赠同游诸君》</font></span></font><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><font color="#0000ff" size="5">大汉阳归又把臂，山南一线学灵猿。</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><font color="#0000ff" size="5">牵衣乱木元为寂，刺眼朝暾乍转昏。</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><font color="#0000ff" size="5">真面从他人世说，仙姿向我雾帔翻。</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><font color="#0000ff" size="5">何时晴定携筇杖，三石梁随诗伯论。</font></span>

风露中宵

<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: arial; mso-hansi-font-family: arial; mso-ascii-font-family: arial;"><font color="#0000ff"><font size="5">名山事业原非易，</font><font size="5">未敢滔滔说苦辛。倦客兄，隐入名山，苦编诗集，真真辛苦了。</font></font></span></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: arial; mso-hansi-font-family: arial; mso-ascii-font-family: arial;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: arial; mso-hansi-font-family: arial; mso-ascii-font-family: arial;"><font face="宋体" color="#0000ff" size="5">见闻须自交游广，学问岂徒故纸翻。放翁纸上得来终觉浅之意也。对句孤平否？</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: arial;"><br/></span></span></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; mso-bidi-font-family: arial; mso-hansi-font-family: arial; mso-ascii-font-family: arial;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: arial; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-hansi-font-family: arial; mso-ascii-font-family: arial; mso-ansi-language: en-us; mso-fareast-language: zh-cn; mso-bidi-language: ar-sa;"><font color="#0000ff" size="5">何时晴定携筇杖，三石梁随诗伯论。最后一句不解。请教方家。</font></span></span></p>

浔阳倦客

<p>谢丰胸和鸟兄^_^</p><p>帮杜同学注一下</p><p>真面目&nbsp; 典既出大苏诗&nbsp; 当天所游之处也有个真面目雕塑还是雕刻之类&nbsp; </p><p>仙姿&nbsp; 约指五老峰</p><p>三石梁&nbsp; 古人写庐山多有此名词大约是地方 今无考</p>

剑尘

<p>所谓诗如其人，可人真实在人也[em01]</p><p>云屏久视花双眼，玉键频敲痛一身。此联好！然“云屏”窃以为可酌。</p>

颖庐

<p>倦客云：三石梁&nbsp; 古人写庐山多有此名词大约是地方 今无考</p><p>颖按：庐山有三石梁,古代文献中早有记载,古典诗歌也多有题咏。文献如南北朝郦道元《水经注》引《浔阳记》说此梁：“长数十丈,广不盈尺,荡然无底。”诗中如南朝张正见有《游简寂观》“三梁涧本绝,千仞路犹通”之句；李白《庐山谣寄卢侍御虚舟》的“金阙前开二峰帐,银河倒挂三石梁”更为著名。今人有考证探索，据说三石梁悬架于五老峰的三峰与四峰之间的峡谷石壁上。不知确否？</p>

浔阳倦客

<p>谢卷师垂顾，前次未得陪侍，还乞鉴谅。</p><p>卷师强记。三十两东东，庐山宣传惯于无中生有，若真成“梁”，怕早已标出；五老峰三四峰间从未听人提起，亦未见如此大梁：）））</p><p>确为孤平，风兄能否带改之？</p>

云海

其二更好。<br/>改为徒从，可否。