庐山半日来回呕吐狼藉

浔阳倦客

<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><font color="#0000ff" size="5">庐山半日往返呕吐狼藉</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><font color="#0000ff" size="5">掩却平居面目真，衣冠楚楚拜匡神。</font></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA; mso-fareast-font-family: 宋体;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: Arial; mso-hansi-font-family: Arial; mso-bidi-font-family: Arial; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;"><font color="#0000ff" size="5">路经八百盘旋曲，重做披肝沥胆人。</font></span></p><p><font color="#0909f7" size="5">改：<br/><br/>掩却平居真面目，衣冠楚楚拜匡神。<br/>岂知八百盘旋后，更作披肝沥胆人。</font></p><br/><br/><br/>

惜梦缘

想象得到可人的狼狈样子,看来还是锻炼得少哦

浔阳倦客

mm所言是极：）））

云中鸾

这什么题啊？一点也不可人。改，快改

浔阳倦客

<p>燕子mm是认为题目不雅吧改还要快？</p><p>再改一稿：<br/></p><p><font color="#0909f7" size="5">庐山半日往返呕吐狼藉<br/>掩却平居真面目，衣冠楚楚拜匡神。<br/>历经八百盘旋路，还作披肝沥胆人。</font></p>

水击三千

不好，

叶子

老倦的精神值得学习！

浔阳倦客

<p>叶子mm&nbsp; 俺是笨人王老大&nbsp; 只有这样苦吟了：）））</p><p>既然兄弟们还不满意 再改：<br/></p><p><font color="#0909f7" size="5">庐山半日往返呕吐狼藉<br/>掩却平居真面目，衣冠楚楚拜匡神。<br/>岂知八百盘旋后，更作披肝沥胆人。</font></p>

叶子

<p>陪倦兄玩会儿，戏改下：）玩完可跑了，任是挥鞭也打不着了~~~~</p><p>尽掩居安真面目，欲将楚楚拜匡神。</p><p>不辞颠簸八百里，重做吐茵狂放人。</p><br/><br/><br/>