鹊桥仙*梅岭主峰下夜坐，溪涧间流萤数百闪熠游移，因约红叶临屏同赋

殊熠在天

<font color="#0909f7" size="3"><strong><br/>洞中霭出、林梢日坠，此夕何其森诡。<br/>老魈留我石溪间，看千点、磷光飞起。<br/><br/>杯堪与酌、狼徒相伺，坐到诸天都睡。<br/>山深随处有萤灯，算归径、不愁云闭。<br/><br/></strong></font><br/><br/><br/><br/><br/><br/><br/>

殊熠在天

也改一改。

心上秋

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;">七律<span lang="EN-US">----</span>萤火（步韵和海棠）<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;">拼将弱质指迷津，莫遣纱囊裹此身。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;">原为情多方引梦，漫言亮小即非真。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;">连宵腐草今宵月，前世流星隔世人。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;">缘定三生终到访，心灯频举对磷磷。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;"><p>&nbsp;</p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;">附海棠原玉：萤火<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;">纱囊攥去堕迷津，合是该成识字身？<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;">腐草生涯如旧梦，青云故事实天真。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;">中宵好处容看月，微火何尝可照人。<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;">柳岸轻风频过访，一湖山色共</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体;">潾潾</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312; mso-bidi-font-family: 楷体_GB2312; mso-hansi-font-family: 楷体_GB2312;">。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 24pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;"><p>&nbsp;</p></span></p>

惜梦缘

<p>羡慕!</p>

殊熠在天

<p>再改一番。</p><p>谢情僧与海棠跟赋，二律都是足堪玩味。</p><p>另谢梦缘。</p>

红叶

<p>鹊桥仙 萤火<br/>云流月隐，风轻夜暮，细草微星初舞。似无有处见飘零，谁为与，点燃幽愫。<br/>依稀孓影，徘徊客路，露重深宵常驻。却怜灯暗照离人，时更向，帘边轻护。</p><p>本意是填踏莎行，被我记成了鹊桥仙，如此愚钝之错误，居然生发在洒家头上。少不得将错就错</p>[em06]

红叶

有空约鼠临屏，今年写满60首的任务说不定差强可以完成

殊熠在天

<p>老衲除了临屏还几不写诗了。</p><p>红叶此词意涵如萤火微闪。</p>

鄱湖渔歌

更喜红叶的

东华人氏

两者都好。老鼠的奇绝，红叶的灵巧！