怀渊明（改原诗）

顽少半个

<div><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #333333; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><font size="4">南山飞鸟衒诗去，渺渺桃源不可寻。<span lang="EN-US" xmllang="EN-US">
                                        </span></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #333333; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><font size="4">但有黄金柳千万，春来处处碧成阴。<img alt="" src="http://www.jiangyouss.com/Skins/default/topicface/face7.gif"/></font></span></p></div><br/>

红叶

<p>和老陶关系不大呀</p>

顽少半个

<p>谢指教，感激。</p><p>我再改</p><div><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #333333; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><font size="4">南山飞鸟衒诗去，渺渺桃源不可寻。<span lang="EN-US" xmllang="EN-US">
                                        </span></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; TEXT-ALIGN: left; mso-pagination: widow-orphan;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 12pt; COLOR: #333333; LINE-HEIGHT: 150%; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: 宋体; mso-font-kerning: 0pt;"><font size="4">但有黄金柳千万，谁来此处抚弦琴？</font></span></p></div><p></p>